How do you feel about using computer-mediated communication?
I both feel convenient and inconvenient. On one side, we can edit article very easily. We don't need to erase lots of things we wrote even tear the paper.One the other side, we have to face the practical problem, the process of setting new stuff is not simple. Therefore, before communicating with people, I think I should improve my computer ability.
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Hi, I'm Pie. There are some mistakes in your article. First, The "both" in your atricle is an adverb. And an adverb is usually put before an adjective. So I think it is better if you say "I feel both convenient and inconvenient." Second, "even" is a conjunction, so I suggest you that you can put an comma before it. Third, "practical" is a word which has good meaning, and "problem" is a word which has bad meaning. So I think that it is not appropriate to use "practical" to describe "problem". These are my suggestion about your article. And I am deeply hope that you can come to my blog and give some suggestion, too.
You can find the using of adverb at the first site.And the using of conjunction at the second site.
1.http://cdict.giga.net.tw/?q=adverb
2.http://cdict.giga.net.tw/q/conjunction
Hello, pie. Thank you for writing common on my blogs. Your commons are really helpful. I did learn something from your commons. Thanks a lot. Also, I definitely will visit your blog!
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